warrirs dirkness risiing: :dewikikts story (source)
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it was a dark and storymie nieght. th prye was runnin thru the forest scareetd.
all aws BAD.
dere was a misteryous cat on the heil.
"hoo hoo" laughd the catt
"no oen wil stpto me naow!" he bellowed
the cat waa righ.. no one culd... all is bad
but a hope remayns.
a porpechy.
"the dew... shall fell froem the levse... and destroy the drkinnss."
ths is the sotry,,, of that dew...
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dewkit was having a drem abotut a catching mice.
then seh was woke.
"dewkit wake up" said a voiec
"ughhh" groaned dwekit.
"does yuo not remamborS?" wondred the voc.
"whut" pondored depkit.
"is... APPENTICE CEREMOUNY!" said the cat excidtedly!
"AAAA" said dewkit "IM GOIENG TO BE LATAE!" she raced out the door
"let all woh are old enougheg to cahtwach there own prya gathre udner teh highrock" shouted thunnderclans ladder.
teh clangathered
"waht is" said a cat?
"TODAYS WE CAL OPENE WARIR ANCEETEROES TO MAK APEMTICE DEWKIT TOADAY U SHALL BE DEWPAW"
THE CLAN CHEERED
"ur mentor shall be... . . . ... . . . . . .ME!"
the clan GASPED
"Omgish" said the newly named dewpaw.
"is true" replied firetsar the thudnerclan leadr.
"Squee replied dewpaw!"
but then...
DEWPAW HEAR A SCREM!1
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chaptrrtt 3: teh kit
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dewpwas rushed to the sauces of the noise,...
she fin...
a poor blakc pelter kit, about 5 moons oald. in teht busehs
"wheres ur mother?" inquired dewpaw
"she DED" cried the kit...,..
"Oh noooooooooo" dewpaw said feeling orry for the kitzs mother bengfmg lost.
just then a gropu of cats caught up to dewpaawwwwee
"is kit?" said bramblecalw.
"ey" said depaw, "does thank maybe firesatra lets us take in?"
"purrhasp" punned brablepaw
dey took the kit bak to camp
after long talk with fireat he decidered to take kit in
"this kit will now be darkkit!" said fireaat.,.
THE CLAN CHEERED
but dustpelt asked "but whom shall queeen it?"
"it is just one moon short of apprenticship." said fires, "we shall make appprentci NOW"
"can us do HAT" said brightheart
"fuck it i'm leader" rebeled firsatr "darkit u shal be darkpaw"
"whas gooing on" wailed the kitAPPENTICE
and then funderclan has a new apprentice!
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darkaw was trainn hard. darkpar is become ood warroor! at least dwepaw thouhgt so.
dewpaw went out on a patorl. she go round border THEN SUDDENLY SHE SAW A RIVERCALN CAT FALL INTO THE WATER!
"OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" yelwped dewaw! "UDNT WARRI IM GETR U OUT!"
she pulleded teeh cat out of watere she saved the day
but... she... INSTEAD!
DEWPAW STRUUGLWEE DDTO CET OUT OFWATRE
but she coudlent. ... ... ... . . ... . . . .
the rviaaclan cat was greatfual foe depwaw save so it tried to save heerere and got stuckin the water tototo
they both go down waterrfall
dewpaws woreld went BLACK
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chaptree 5 teh wuest for dewpaw
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drakpwe wok uep. it was mreaning. tim to traiiiiiin with firsterrr!
but notic ssumthang he did. dewpaw wasn't there!1
he was concerned. dewpaaew was a friend, becus she saved his lyfe...
sadly fierstar probpalywants to do som train. he hoped it borederr parole or maybe dewpaw not be found?
"darkpoo!" yelled fiererstre.
"cen u get reddy for train?"
"OAK!" shouted darkpaw back at him
darkpaw was hungary so he went to fresh kill piel.
he saw...
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drakpwe wok uep. it was mreaning. tim to traiiiiiin with firsterrr!
but notic ssumthang he did. dewpaw wasn't there!1
he was concerned. dewpaaew was a friend, becus she saved his lyfe...
sadly fierstar probpalywants to do som train. he hoped it borederr parole or maybe dewpaw not be found?
"darkpoo!" yelled fiererstre.
"cen u get reddy for train?"
"OAK!" shouted darkpaw back at him
darkpaw was hungary so he went to fresh kill piel.
he saw...
nothing exepct fud..
why did i think there would eb somthong there?
he took at nice pulmy mouse and eat fodo
some tiem latre
firestar was take dewarkpaw on bord patrole.
he took dustpelt an sandstrom asswel.
they go near rivercaln border... and see...
A CAT ALL WET AN SHOCKED!
"what happen?" said fressatr to the rivercaln cat.
"i fell in, an dwas recued by a thudnerclan cat.." said thre cat
"eeeeeeeeeeeee" said darkpaaw. "was it a tortishell cat? with one gren ey and on bloo?"
"yes how did you know" replied the cat
"OH NO DEWPAW!111!1" SAID DARkpaw
"does u know where she flow"
"down said reiverclan cat"
"okey." darkpaw mewd
"darkpaw uno we can not swim for dewpaw" firestar gently told dakpew
"but..." whinpered dawkpar
"her fat is in the hands of satrcaln now." firestar explained.
darkaw aws sad. depaw was FRIEND. if firstar wont help her... what cna seh dooo?/
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"ugh" complained dewpaw. "whats gong on"? se heheh wuestionsed..
where am i?
she was ien a foresst. it was very... mysterios.
"what happend?"
dewpaw looked around. she saw no water... how did i wash up here?
"i see your awake"
dewpaw looked behind her...
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darkpaw was training fighting moves with firestarp.
"veray god" he said to his appentic.
"but your distraced by dewpawyes?" he questioend
"y" said dark w
"lif is hud darkpaw replied firstar."
"-b-btut" DARKPAW wailed
"somtimes we hav to accexpt losses/" firestar repleid
"coem on. is late. u best be slee."
"oak..." said darkpaw.
darkaw headded to the appentic den an sat in spot... no dewpaw is weird?
but eventally she went to slep.
her drems were fileld with nothang but worrie...
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"hee heee" said the mysterious cat, sitting on the hill
"son my plon will be complet!" he
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drakpwe wok uep. it was mreaning. tim to traiiiiiin with firsterrr!
but notic ssumthang he did. dewpaw wasn't there!1
he was concerned. dewpaaew was a friend, becus she saved his lyfe...
sadly fierstar probpalywants to do som train. he hoped it borederr parole or maybe dewpaw not be found?
"darkpoo!" yelled fiererstre.
"cen u get reddy for train?"
"OAK!" shouted darkpaw back at him
darkpaw was hungary so he went to fresh kill piel.
he saw...
nothing exepct fud..
why did i think there would eb somthong there?
he took at nice pulmy mouse and eat fodo
some tiem latre
firestar was take dewarkpaw on bord patrole.
he took dustpelt an sandstrom asswel.
they go near rivercaln border... and see...
A CAT ALL WET AN SHOCKED!
"what happen?" said fressatr to the rivercaln cat.
"i fell in, an dwas recued by a thudnerclan cat.." said thre cat
"eeeeeeeeeeeee" said darkpaaw. "was it a tortishell cat? with one gren ey and on bloo?"
"yes how did you know" replied the cat
"OH NO DEWPAW!111!1" SAID DARkpaw
"does u know where she flow"
"down said reiverclan cat"
"okey." darkpaw mewd
"darkpaw uno we can not swim for dewpaw" firestar gently told dakpew
"but..." whinpered dawkpar
"her fat is in the hands of satrcaln now." firestar explained.
darkaw aws sad. depaw was FRIEND. if firstar wont help her... what cna hes dooo?/
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"ugh" complained dewpaw. "whats gong on"? se heheh wuestionsed..
where am i?
she was ien a foresst. it was very... mysterios.
"what happend?"
dewpaw looked around. she saw no water... how did i wash up here?
"i see your awake"
dewpaw looked behind her...
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darkpaw was training fighting moves with firestarp.
"veray god" he said to his appentic.
"but your distraced by dewpawyes?" he questioend
"y" said dark w
"lif is hud darkpaw replied firstar."
"-b-btut" DARKPAW wailed
"somtimes we hav to accexpt losses/" firestar repleid
"coem on. is late. u best be slee."
"oak..." said darkpaw.
darkaw headded to the appentic den an sat in spot... no dewpaw is weird?
but eventally she went to slep.
his drems were fileld with nothang but worrie...
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"hee heee" said the mysterious cat, sitting on the hill
"son my plon will be complet!" he laughed. "sooooon" he echod.
"IT SHAl be drak timse for ccalns...
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the riverclan cat retuened to it's camp
that was a nastie scaer...
lepodstre said "what why out so log?"
the cap repleid "is near dewon in river.."
all the catslaffed becus they were rivecaln an riverclan cats swam
the cat was embarrrrresd
"don be so sad, drownfur" said a cat
"but they mean" said the newly revvealed stonepelt
"is lfe" said the cat
":(" said stonepet. "why does everycant hat me"
"u know why" said the cat sympatheticalyt
"is it becus i suck an swim so moterh nam me drwonkit?"
"ye" said the cat
drownfur was sad into the night..
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Chapter SIEX teh laern
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darkpaw was walking through the forest.. he was doing medican cat gather for jayfethre. jayfethere waas veray busy in teh monpol today so he colet herb jus in cas
"whre marrygold#" said darkpaw
"there soke"
he picked up the marigold
i foundit
he was hap
yay
but then he remembered dewpaw
dewpaw... plz coem bak safely
he praied to sartclan for her safe.
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"who U?" asked dewpaw to the voice
"i'm cat how saved U" said the cat
"OMG thans i gus" she apreticated.
"where aru whe""
"weere in my forst" said the old cat
"URS?" asked dewpaw
""""yes replied oldcat"
oak
"i've been waitinn for u fo man moons depaw" said oldcat.
"u hold a dangerous poewwr in u" he wanred
"waht is" said dewpaw
"does u wan to awaken int" questioned oldcat
"YES" replid DEW
then he trained her powers
"remember dewpawp. with grate power coesm gret responsperbillity!" called oldcat
"oak." said dewpaw. heading hom
dewpwa learnt her powers require her to kiell sumon..
she had an idea..
teh odcat semed... smart. and oowerful...
shes sure star caln wouldn't mind.
she walked up to odlcat again
"huh? whatswhy u here dewpaw?" sayd oldcat
"im come... to... KILL YOU!" growled depaw
"NOOOOOOOOoo" he said as his throat was clawed.
she started to absorb his powerses
dewpawn learned how to flight!
dewpaw leant to magic!
dewap learn fighskills!
"hahaahh" laughed dewpaw
she had all power now...
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darkaw returned towards his camp
but then.. HE SEE FIRE IN TEH FROEST!
"oh NOOOOo" said darkpaw..,.." he rush thudner
fire thudenr cclan run
panic
dewpaw doesn't know what to do as his clanmates paniced
what is happen
all...
is...
BAD!
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chaotet 7 the fire and thehe discovery
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drownfur woke to the sound of smoke burning
"FIRE!" he heard a cat shout
panicking,,,,,,m he went outside
it was true,,,,,,,a! there was a fire! what could have caused theis/
he had a bad feeling... what if the clans had to leave again?
he only hoped that wasn;rt the case...
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darkpaw was heling his clan evacuate
fires were everywhhere?!
firestar lost anotehre life in th eprocess
darkpwa waas extremly worried
he hoped dewpaw was saf. wherever she may be...
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dewpaw was headin towrds thudner caln but then she sees fire
"oh no" said dewpaw
but er calnmatsr could handle it.,.,., she has to mak trip
to
the
MOONPOOOL!"""2
she wanted to consult strclan of her actionsss
so she headi to monpool
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after teh riverclan cas got out of cam
they head to fortres
but leadpodstar noticed somthing
"where drownfur?" shew asked her clans
the clan looked worried at each other
"i havnt seen hhim since teh fire" said one cat
"he must of ded" said a elder
"dere is no thing we can does now" leapodstar wisdoemd
"may satrclan lit his paff"
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drownfur woke up to a unfamilere plac
where i
heh lllooked around
what hapen
he saw he was in teh plains,,, near a river
i acn see my calns from her!1
he saw riverclan camp burn
and.. THUDNERCLA?
whatt?/
what is happening?
ar we gong to have to leave the forrest AGAIN?.?
he hoped not...
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teh thunder clan headed to fourtress
and they meet riverclan
"firtsar" says leapodstar " is fire too?"
"ye" replied firesssstar
"what we does?" leapodstar asked "where we liv now/?"
firestar looked hgrim "i blieve we must leav the forst again."
the clans gasped
yowls of dissapproval echoed throught the isllamd
"but what aoutour KITA?"
"na the EDLERS"
firestar looked calm.
" i do not have any nansnwers to ur uquestieons."
"all i know is our world is chrashi down"
"we musust do somthing"
"we cananant sit hreeee an die"
a cat meowed from the crowd "what about the tribe? they took us in befurrei"
"no said firetdar. we cannot burden them anymroe""
"we must rely on oursevs."
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drownfur was desperatly look for prey
he knew he couldnot get back to camp now
and he neds feed
his eye xauht something...
the mountain!1!
he felt like heading dere. not ur why
..after heading to the muntain
he saw... in the distance...
ANOTHER FOOREST?
"WHAT?" he yowled in surprise
it was far away but...
the clans could live there!
but...
what if others cats lived there?
they found the tribe so...
pusheing the negative thoughs out of his mind, he headed back to the forest
he must give the clans a good news!
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AN- hey guysssssss sorry for the late chapter this time!" i was bust twith life an aslo planung my storay. Expect god plot to cooem!"
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chaptor ate: teh rebeleion
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dewpaw was head to monpal for consult szarclan
she heads thererere
"om it so pret" thought ewjaw
she sleped at the pool and draank water
she ssle
she saw satrclan in hre dreams
"starclan!1!"dewpaw said
"dewpaw!" said a starcat "we ar very sippoint in yo"
"butte said dewpaw"
"no said starclancat".. "u hav forsakn ur warror ancestoress dewpaw"
" vere are not allowe into satclan! or serv ur can!" growled the cat
"NO" shouted ddwpaw. "im not LET YOU!11" she said sas she slaughtered the ctas around her
there was blood
"no one shal com between me an my forest."2 said dwepppaw!
a cat ran into the clearing
"hey thistleflight wh" stopped the cat
"U KILLED HIMsaid the cat
he JUMED AT DEWPAW
but then she woke up,,,,, umharm
he he he
im most porweful now!"
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chapter 9: whops
AN- afetr so muc tim im bak! sory for not make chapter for while...,, i was go through imporetna lif tim oak? here is sotry! REMEMbern if u submit your ocsi mite put them in da sotry! enjo!
chatter 0 the dew striks
HAHAHEHAEHAHE thougth dewewpw
|"iam invinc now:
"i can ruel ALL CALN!1!11!"
seh teleported to fortreddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddds
and then she said to all the capt s
"i am god new"
"i have mudeded all the satrcaln coots"
"all your clans belong to me now"
the cats gaped
"wht" said starleapod
"is true" replied dewplight
"i am god"
"bow down or u get mudud TOO"
all the crast were shakking in fur
wat do whisper darkpaw rto firsotreeeeeeeeew
"i donno but mabe we can rasin withthth her
"oak" repled dorkpaw
"HAHAHAHAH" laughed dewflight as she watche the cats bow down to her
"thas right bow to dwepweo"
"whats this?"
"fir star why arent you bow"? wondered dewfuhrer
"i will never bew to u dew"
"dai" and dewpaw killed firesttre
"oh no" said firstar as he was bloddilhy shot to piecew sby dewglights dlassor atkc
"aaa" screameed sanstrom as she weped ovr her mat
all
was
BAD
dewpaw started to get a star on her forehead
she declared; "from this day forth, i shall be known as DEWSTR
"the clans cats said oak"
but then suddenly TIGGERSTAR APPEARS
"ho ho ho" he says
"i am here to rule forest with darkclan clans"
"grr says dewpaw" "this my forrest go way"
no says tiegrestore
"i am rule now!" he laughs confidently
"no says dewstar" and then she desintergrated him with her gun eyes
then she exploded and murdered all the cats within a mile raidsu
"what" says drownfur as he watches a boom at hs hom
"is cats oak?" he wondered
he headed to the bomb site
there was only dust and ground
all the cats' disfigured bodies lay there
"gasp" he gasped
what did happen here?
then sudden;y dewpaw rose from the ashes impaled drownfur and then traveled back in time
"those silly cats blew themselves up" said a mysterious old voice
STAY TUNED FOR DEWSTAR DAYS OF FUTURE PAST
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chatper 10 RETURNto past
GOOD MONin fans of sotry,,,, im sorry for monthes not wright my sorty,,,, im sray... ill promies to write consistarently this teim oak? i left ith big clonfhagner last timm so i hop ur exite for conclude! btw' any ocs u sumbit i might use in stiry,,,, if there good enouhg... enjo! (also removefd the lins i used so now i ant us them : ( (but i can copupast them!)
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dewewflog was travle thru tim
backu,... to when ...shewasappentic...
my mastre plon is beg,,,,,,, i mustve build the, parts to plan,,,,, back in tim,,,,,,,,,
i must recuit othre cats..., who...tho?
stardew emergaerered just outside of caln,, near the lack.
huhuhuhuhuh said dewstara.
fundercaln...
she decicded. to wait ,,, until her yungre self goes t obordered. to save riverclen cot, as it hapen few hap ago/...
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darkaw was trainn hard. darkpar is become ood warroor! at least dwepaw thouhgt so.
dewpaw went out on a patorl. she go round border THEN SUDDENLY SHE SAW A RIVERCALN CAT FALL INTO THE WATER!
"OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" yelwped dewaw! "UDNT WARRI IM GETR U OUT!"
she pulleded teeh cat out of watere she saved the day
but... she... INSTEAD!
DEWPAW STRUUGLWEE DDTO CET OUT OFWATRE
but she coudlent. ... ... ... . . ... . . . .
the rviaaclan cat was greatfual foe depwaw save so it tried to save heerere and got stuckin the water tototo
they both go down waterrfall
dewpaws woreld went BLACK
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huehuehuehuehueuheuhueh" laughed dewstr.
she fisfhsfed dewstar out of warter
now beggins... phase won/
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dewpaw woke up in a clearin
"what" she inquired
"why am here? was drown..." she said out lod to herslg
"hehehehe" said a MYSTERIOUS voc.
"u're in my capiticity new..."
"who're you?" dewpaw angrily inquir
"i am... DEWSTAR!" said dewstar
"U WOT' screamed dewpaw
"ur not dew,,, ME IS"
"ohohohoho" laff dewstart
"that is what you think"
"it is" replied dewpaw
"whatever said dewstar!2"
"ur complianc,... is not necary. for paln."
"i mearly must kep u lucked up... with no descap."
"i must tak ur plac... and pretend to be u!"
"GASP" GASPED DEWPAW
she gon kep me lock down... must esco...FOR CALN,
"well huehue... i must leave now..,.,., enjoy,...CAPTIVIOTY!" exclaimed dewflight
"NOOOOOOOO SAID DEWPAW
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CHAPTERERE 11 THE Fate of drownfuer
hey guy it dewpfint. enoy sotry TOLD U I UPDAT REUG. remmebr oc if its good submit and might story. reiw n raet.
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drown fur see expos,.un.
u wot he though
he RUSHED OT CRATNOR.
"WAS BOOM?" he inquisitioned, wonder where the caln wd./
mabe clan oak? he said.
he decide t ohead to windycaln. and find turh.
on his wayto winder clan.,, he head trhu rivecl.n...\
he see vburntwon...
"no" he said
"my calj..." he saddend.
"WHYYYYUYYY" he SADEDN
he sadly ocntineute dto siufgydu wind flcan.
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dewpaw was STUCK IN THE CLEARing,lcage.
i must fidn, way otut and save my cal.n... nbut who?
she saerhch the xclearing
THEIR WAS NO WAYOUT.
NOO!
HOW WILL SAVE FUNDERCALN NOW?!
she decide. to slep.
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dewpaw wake in .\
"herlllo dewpaw. said a mysteriously staracatclan."
"wi must tel u secret."
"what is?" question sttaclanedcat.
"is that dewstar,, u sform sfuert.d...s plan is to TAKE OVGER WALD.
"WAT/?" SURPRISED DEWPAWSTAR
"its ture. she is evvil."
"the only way to stop is to tavel time LIKE HER"
"how do?" inqureid dpaw
"with this ." the star clan cat said
he magically gav stardpaw poer of time gtrav.
"witth this you now can fight dewstartpaw"
"use wise. or else might end op lick her..."
"oak." correct dewpaw.
i shall save my caln...
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dont worry guy!s! i wil continetue to mak chapter. just for you...,,,/
dont freget tochcuk my other sotry,. ... its dset in the same univ. se uNEXT TIME
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CHAPTER d12 dROWN FURS wuesr
hello fnnn! I HOP U ENKJOY CHAPTER ALSO REWVIEW.. ENJOY N RIEVIE
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rownfur was walk near clans,
i wonder what hapen to them? they all gone...he decided to decie to head ot mountains.
heheaded to montias.
i see forest,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.../fnh;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;, clan headed theri
it's worth a shoot/
and so he heded there
but on top of teh moutain was figure,, tha he didnot see...
"HAHAHAHHAHA"
said the booming voic ontop of tmoantisa.
"soon the calns wil be MIN"
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chapter 13 DRAK PAST
hey?llo welcome to chaptre 13 of my sortr. hop u livk, and dont freget that u can haav ur charcters in it if u submit them via mesage. oak? enjoy
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a csat was awlking from tolegplac to fo erest.
she that of her psat...
she was bully be many cat at catplac...
she lost hre farthe when she young
i miss fathre.
as he walked thru raimn she decided to thonk about hre farther
scourage,,,,,, farthre... i will aveg U!
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the calns were peecfel. unwaeare of dewflights MENACE.
firestor was died to train dewpaw. he hehdede to the appenticden
"dewpw/?" he answedd
"where are u?"
he wondere were she go
"has nayone seen dewdewpwe?" he asked the clan
no they said
"he started oto worry" i wonder if shehs oak...
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dewpaw was decideding whetehr to use timetravleo r not.
it's probally vray danger... i should not use unless nessicy...