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PROROLOUGUE
Stars streeked across da sky. Te clearing was bright. There waz a kit on the ground!1! A ginger cat looked up!
"U cant stay heer wif a kti!" He mewled to the silver one dat had joost birhted! "Ull haf to join ThundoerClan!11"
"Okay." SAAID DE SILEVEr 1.
1 HOUR BEFORE
Dere were cats looking into a glowin pool. A bluw 1 gaspesed! "It's da kit of prophe y!211!"
"Rllyy!111!1" Gaspeed a golfend one! He pushed himself to de front of da ring!
"Eet is Loinheart!"
"Wow!1! KAWAII1!" GASPEDED ALL THE CATS.
"Dwe muzt send a sign!" Declared Bluesatr!1!
"I know what to do." Said a MYSTERUOUS voice. Evry1 gasped and turned... It was... ECHOSONG!111! eVERYONE GASPED!
"We shoold mak the stars move!" She declard!
"YES." EVERYONE AGGREd agreedfully...
TO BEE CONTINUEED!
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CHAPTER 1
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CHAPTER 1
Moonkti waz sleeping. She was havin a nice dreem about catching prey, when was woken up! "Com on Moonkit! we ned to hav an ADVENTUR!" SAid a voce. Monkit was startled!
"RAR" Ze roared and pounced on de intruder!
"Stahp!" They cried out! "Tis moi, Leperkit, Moon!"
"Oops sorry. U started me!" She apoligized.
"Its Ok. Let us go on the advent naow!" Mewled Leoperkit.
"K!" Moonkit instanlty perked up.
"Follow me!" Lepardkit announced, wakling out of the den. Mooonkit happily folowed him
A FEW MINUTES LATER
"Yay! We are out of de camp! WE can haf a grate adventure!" Leopardkit pureed.
"Hurrah! Im going over there!" Monokit said to de tom. SHE padded over to an hole. It was rakn!
"Wait! Tat;s a-" LeperdKit was interrupted by a loud growling suond! "GRRR" it growled! Both of de kits fliped around! In front of them was... A FOX!
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CHAPTER 2
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CHAPTER 2
aS The kits faced de fox, Moonkit new just wat to do! She leeped at deE FOX AN SWIPED ER CLAWS across it's face! "Monnkit! Watchl out!" Leoparkit criedout. The Fox snapped at her, and she gracefuly avoied the bit! 'Few!" LeepordKit gaspet, he ten did is part in te fight by insulting the fox's mther!
"Take this!" Monkit roared shoving her claws into de foxz ie.
"Yo Mom had bad breath! Yout mother is the reason you find it so diffivcult to interact with otherz!" Leoprdkit barwged te fox with insulting inzultsa bourt his moma! He foox ran away form Moonkits attacks and lepredskits insults! Moonkit felt proud. She had beeten an fox!
IN A MINUT
SUDNELY! A PATRol run up to dem! Firestar n BrambleClaw an evem DovWing wer in it!
"Wat are u doing heer!" Bramblecalw demanded .
"We were going on a adventure!" Moontik awnsered.
"Th-" Bambrleclaw wast intereruped by Firestar!
"Tats OK. I wanderd of alot as a kti to." He said understandbly. Doovewangs eyez widend as she saw de fox hair in Moons claws and the fox runin awy in de distance with er super powahs.
"Deed u fight a fox!?" She asked. Monkit took a deeap breaht an waz abuot to awnser when Leopard interupted er!
"Yees we did!" Momokit glanceed anoydly at Leepordkit. "Soory" he muterd. Brambleclaw loked at Firstar knowingley.
"U shoold be a apprentis now Moonkit!" Zaid Firestart.
"But Leoperdkit helpd to!He shuold be a app aswell!" Moomkit portested
"Hell be an aprentike to Moon" Rerplyed Brambleclwa.
"Leets go hav r appy ceremony naow!11!" Meowed Leopardkit extsidely!
"YA! Let s go!1!" Agread Moon.
"OK" Sayd den strted wakling bakc too camp.
TO SOON BE CONTUNED
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