Obsidianpaw wook up to a lot of birds. She walked outside th e apps den and saw firestar. She felt her hart fluter. He was old but she thot he was hot.
"hi" she said and smiled at him.
"hey' firestar replied with a wink.
He winked! He loved her! "meat me in mah den" he said
"but I have training" obsidian paw said
"idc" firestar said
obsidianpaw was excited. Why did he want too see her in his den?
(shuld i continue pls review bye)
PART 2 HE LOVES ME
Obsidianpaw eagley followed firestar to his den. When they were there he padded close too her and she got nervous. He suddenly kissed her and she gasped.
"firestar no you have a mate you cant make me have ur kits" she said
"I love u more then sandstorm! Be my mate! Idc if I am am a lut older then u!" he said
obsidinpaw pawsed. He was so hot. "ok." She memured.
Firestar kissed her agin and she kissed him bak. He pured and licked her chin.
(will continu if I get 1 nice review thankz)
PART 3 OH NO!
firestar kissed obsidianpaw four a while. Suddenly he pressed against her. He purred ludly and twinned his tail with hers. Obsidian pured in plesure. He stated to get closer. Sudenly a cat came in. It was ...sandstorm!
Obsidianpaw blushd a lot and shrenk back. Firestar growlrd. "I love her not you!"
"but-but shes an dumb app!" sandstorm yelled.
"I LOVE HER!" firestar screamed.
"u only think she is sexy!"
"Well she is." firestar said, licking his lips as he gazed at obsidianpaws light blue pelt. Her ears were tipped purplish-black and her atractive eyes were forst green.
Sandstorm cried, she cried so hard obsidianpaw felt bad. "Firestar i-"
"Sh" firestar cut her off. He began to make out with her in front of sandstorm. Sandstorm sobbed. Firestar grinned wider and wider as sandstorm got more upset. He purred and so did she. Sandstorm wailed.
"Why does she hav too be so hot!" Sandstorm wailed. Then she came close to obsidian and licked her afectionately while firestar was still kissing her. Obsidianpaw growled. Gross! She thought.
Sandstrom tired to come closer but firestar broke away and chased her away "SHES MAH MATE!" He yowled.
Sandstorm ran away. Firestar turned to obsidian and purred ludly. Lets continu.
"u uh ok...ay." Obsidianpaw agreed.
they kissed for the rest of the nite.
(Thanks for postive reeviews :) its not really supposed to be funny tho lolz)
PART 4 LOVE TRIANGLE
The next day obsidianpaw went to jayfeathers den. He looked at her with longing in his cool blue eyz. He pured.
"I smell firestar on u" he said.
"oh…uh…" obsidianpaw stammered.
"how abot….i get my scent on you to" he sugested. Obsidianpaw blushed. Befor she culd do anything he waz kissing her. He kissed her harder than firestar. She enjoyed it. He took it to da next level by twining there tails together. Obsidians heart raced. The blud rushed in her ears. They both pured loudly.
Obsidian left the den felling happy and satisphied. She new she liked jayfeather more den firestar…but firestar was so hot…suddenly a memery flashed in her mind. It was firestar making out wif her as a kitt. He had always loved her….who wuld she choose?
PART 5 REGRET
Obsidianpaw felt pain in her belly. She immediately went too jayfeathers den…at leest it was an excuse to see him again. She still hadn't tooled firestar about them and it had ben a week! She went to his den and acted sexy, she culd tell it gave him pleasure. "my belly hurts." She said az she ran her tale acros his cheek. Jayfeather let ot a cole breath.
"ill check it out four u" he said. Obsidian ruled over on her bak. Jayfeather brushed his paw a long her belly. Befor he could start to do somthing she wuld have liked,, he gasepd.
"OBSIDIANPAW U R PREGNANT!" he gasped.
Obsidianpaw felt sick. "are…are…they urs or firestars."
"idk" jay said.
Obsidian cried on hiz shulder "i…i….hope dey r urs…but they culd be firestars….or…" obsidian gasped, remembering back to when she was first apprenticed and liked lionblzae "THEY ARE LIONBLAZES!"
Jayfeather sobbed. "my own brother…." He cried. Obsidianpaw felt bad but she new they wer lionblazes. She rushed to the leader s den an told firestar. Firestar gave her a gash on her face. "DEY SHULD HAVE BEEN MINE" he yowled. Obsidian was hurt mentally and outsidely. She sobbed in the apprentice den…a cat came into comfort her. She luked up and it was…icewing?!
(2 b continued pls stop hating. Are you team firestar, jay, lion, or ice? XD)
PART 6 NO HOMO
Obsidanpaw felt comfortable next too icewing. She crled up against her az ice licked her afectinately. She kissed ice quickly and turned away. Instead of being shocked icewing kissed her bak on the lips. She kissed her hard and pressed against her. Obsidian shiverd. She luved a she-cat?
"I cant be wif you I had an affair wif firestar, nd pregnant with lionblazes kits, nd jayfeather is my bf" obsidian said.
"ill be ur mate instead of dumb jayfeather." Icewing said.
"ugh why does everybody luv me" obsidianpaw said.
Icewing ignored her and kissed her more. Obsidian didn't proteest. Suddenly jayfeather walked in. he didn't notice cuz he waz blind. He went ovr and kissed obsidian, her didn't know ice was kissing her to. Obsidian fekt awkward.
"I wil father da kitz" jayfeather said and walked away.
"that was close" icewing said.
Icewing walked away. what will I tell jayfeather? I want icewing too b the kits parent wif me not him. Obsidian thought. She cried and ran out of the camp.
PART 7 QUEST
Obsidian felt pains in her bely. She knew the kits were comeing and she waz far from camp. She layed down and had teh kits. They died except one. It was a dark brown tom. It looked nothing like lionbaze or her. Weird. Obsidian new she couldn't go back to the clan so she stayed outside for a while. She buried he kitz like dirt, she hated them and there father. She stared at the living kit.
Suddenly she relized he was differebt. Hiz eyes were amber and he already had a scar on his noz. Weird.
She went back to camp with him and saw icewing. Icewing took him to the nursery. Jayfeather was shocked she kitted and still dint know she loved icewing. Obsidian growled at him.
'I luv icewingnot u" she said.
Jayfeather ran away crying. She dint care having kits had filed her with rage.
PART 8 REBORN
Her kit was being made an apprentice it had been 6 months since she kited.
"ur name will be tigerpaw" firestar said.
TIGERPAW?! Obsidian realized something in dat moment. Her kit was tigerstar reborn. How culd she kill him b4 he was evil? She had started to actually luv him after he was born. She cried and ran away form the ceremony. Icewing ran up and comforted her.
"it will be ok I will kill him" she said
"NO!" scremed obsidian.
Ice siged "what wil we do?"
"idk" said obsidian. Her life was horrible she was only made a wario a moon ago (her name was obsidianwing btw) and her kit was an apprentice. She luved like 5 cats, and her kitwaz evil. Ugh.
PART 9 THE CHOICE
(took a brake cuz of hate. Pls stop flaming.)
obsidian had too finally chose her mate. She hated firestar, icewing was boring, lion left her, nd jayfeather was mean. She had nobody. She loved nobody. Angry filled her up. I will kill my kit! She screamed in her head.
Obsidian ran out of camp. She saw tigerpaw. She jumped on tigerpaw an tackled him.
"m-mom?" he cried weekly.
Obsidianwing sliced his neck open and he was dead. His menoter berrynose gasped. "YOU ARE EXILE" he screamed.
Obsidian ran away. She left all clan territory. Suddenly she was in the mountains. She ran more, and hit a cat. He looked down at her, he was the hottest cat she had ever seen.
He had goth black fur wit ginger and brown and white patches. His eyes were dark green. They were so beautiful they looked like they had eyeliner. His fur was long and sleek. He had bright white teeth with fangs. The last thing she noticed was his goth black coller with silver spikes and a scull hung from it. In the scull the name sol was carved.
PART 10 HOME
(woo 10 partz! Thanks too all teh nice reviewers xD! And all of u flamers are dumb and in dis fanfic all of ur OCs r exiled cuz they were dumb flamers like u. PS sol is a vamp and goth kinda bc I wanted him to be smexy I know he isn't rlly vamp)
obsidians hart beat fast. She whispered "hi sol"
he gazed at her "hey." He said.
"i-I'm obsidianwing…" obsidianwing said. " I was exiled from thunderclan."
"I hate thunderclan!" sol said "I took over bloodclan so I could fight them…the old leader scourge visited me in the df and made me a vampire so I could live long and kill easily."
"Your so…smexy…" obsidian said, drooling. Sol snorted and pured, he rubbed against her.
"so r u" he said.
Obsidian blushed and licked sols cheek. They made out for a long time. She slept beside him. She felt at home when she was wit sol.
PART 11 THE END!
(Hai guys :3 i toke a break bc of all the mean flamerz! I looked up what a troll fic is and dis isnt a joke? I m trying my best lel...plz stop flaming. :( Im gunna try to write better thank u 4 da nice advice in da reviewz! Anyway dis is the final part! Who do u think obsidianwing wil be with? BTW U FLAMERS R DUMB IDIOTS HAV U HEARD OF A THING CALLED A LIFE?)
Obsidianwing new she luved sol. She got up and stretched beside him. He fliped his scene hair and kissed her.
"I loaf you" he meowed "I love you to" obsidianwing meowed.
Sol wrapped his tail around hers. "Lets run away from the dumb clans!" He memured.
"...alright" obsidianwing excited.
She would miss jayfeather and icewing and lionblaze and firestar but she had sol now. Sol had dark black fur and piercings and scene hair and had BOTDF tatooed on his shoulder…he was perfect.
"Lets go" obsidianwing drawled.
Sol ran and she followed.
"Im gunna change my name" sol said flipping his hair "to sun because spanish is stupid"
Obsidianpaw sneakered because she agreed spanish was dumb. Finally her and sun reached a river.
They heard paw steps behind them. It was thunderclan! They spun, they were gonna have to fight. Firestar attack obsidianwing and she was uffended. She fought back and raked his eye. She belated his tail and bended his paw. He was too strong. He thr owed her in the river with sol.
Sol fell to the bottom and was dead.
"No how could firestar do that he cant die now." Obsidianwing circled. She swam to the top. SHE WAS ANGRY.
She channeled all of her rage and her blue fur turned red, her eyes flamed. She riped open firestars throught. He died.
Obsidianwing ran away she couldnt believe what she has done. She ran to the top of cliff.
She put one paw under the edge and sudanly she was churning in the air.
(And thats da end. If this gets good reviews i wil right moar X3)
(Guess whoz back frickerz XD i got some nice commets so i continued i impruved a lot! :3 WARNING M RATED SCENE IN THIS CHAPTER)
Obsidianwing was falling thru the air. She couldnt move but she screamed for help. Injectionly claws hooked her back and pulled her up. She blackes out right away.
Obsidian woke up in...SHADOWCLAN CAMP. She whipped loudly until blackstar ran in. He was hot and had peercings on his nose and ears and probably other places he also had long dark emo hair with a red streak in it. He had muscles and was so HOT obsidian almost got a nozebleed (x3).
Blackstar sniffed and said "i saved you because you were so..." He gapped, "smexy"
Obsidian smeeled and they fricked four da rest of the da night. ***
Obsidian woke up beside blackstar she could finally forget about her past when she was with him. Blackstar woke up and kissed er on the nuzzle. Obsidian retaliated. ***
It was a month later and obsidian was taking a walk when she realized she was fat and tired. She grouped, she new this feeling. Obsidianwing was...PREGNANT WITH BLACKSTARS CHILD.
(2 be continued X333)
(Geez guys im trying mah best just goo away -.- if u rlly want me to continue dis storeh pls be nicer :( fuq you FLAMERZ ! Also appurantly its bad to use text languge so ill frickin change it leave me almone!)
Obsidianwing ran to the camp. She saw Blackstar, he was so hot and sexy. He stood at her.
"What wrong?" He pondered and flipped his emo bangs from the eyes.
"Im..." Obsidian pauseded, "pregnant!"
Blackstar gasped and he blooshed, then whistled in a law voice, "with my kits?"
"Yes!" Said obsidianwing.
"No! This will like totally ruin my rep!" Secreted blackstar, hsi eyes flapped red.
"What..?" hissed obsidian!
"You are in exile!" nipped blackstar.
Oh frick no! Though obsdian. She couldnt loze a love again. She hopped forward and clumped blackstars neck.
He fell to teh ground. Dead.
Obsidian sobbed. Her tears turned to blood tears as she ran away in the forest.
Obsidian was cold and starving she straddled up and saw a figure in the distant. it looked like...a she-cat...with...blond bangs and white fur and red eyes with a bright red dress on. Obsidian got a nosebleed immetiatly.
"Hi" seemed the she cat, "im leopardstar"
"Lepardstar! I thought you w dead!" Screeched obsidianwing.
"I am dead..." Said leopardstar, "on the inside."
Obsidian raised her eyebros and smeed, "can i...stay with you for a while. I have a feeling i will no lunger be welcome in the clans..."
"Of course" bowed leopardstar, "ill explain to you why i faked my death on th e way to meh home."
"I Am sad and left because the clans were full of preps that didnt understand me...but i have a feeling you will"
"Cool" spewed obsidianwing.
They reached leopardstars home. It was a large cave that was gray and on the inside there was a huge pool of water and there was. A fresh kill pile full of fresh prey and also two nests side by side filled with down feathers though you could tell leopardstars nest was the only one that had been slept in. "Its...beautiful..." gasped obsidianwing.
"thanks" winked leopard star as she tossed her bangs.
Obsidianwing felt something stir in side her but she dressed it deep dawn.
Obsidian purred and ran toawrds the pool. Leopardstar followed chuckying happily. They jumped in teh pool.
Leopardstar emerged from the water, her bangs and fur wet. Her fur was wet and framed her beautiful shape and face. leopardstar removed her dress so it wouldnet get too wet. Oh frick, thought obsidianwing.
Leopardstar was the most beautiful and perfect cat she had ever seen with blond bangs and white fur and blood red eyes. Leopardstar moved closer to obsidianwing and suddenly obsidians nose was bleeding but leopard star kept coming closer until her lips touched obsidians. They made out and leopardstar wrapped her paws around obsidianwing.
"I have some catnip in my nest if you want some." Said leopard star.
"Oh of course" pured obsidianwing and they went and got the catnip.
Obsidian didnt remember the rest of the night.
***** Obsidian woke up sleeping with leopardstar. Her fu r was messy and leopard star was asleep. Obsidian went and looked at herself in the pool. She was wearing a tight black jeweled collar and had a bite mark on her neck she also had a bloody nose and tattered fabric on her fur. She glanced and saw leopard star had black lipstick all over her fur. Obsidian was wearing black lipstick.
((OH FRICK XD whatwill happen next?))
"LEPARDSTAR YOU FRICKED ME" shouted obsidianwing.
"i didnt mean to plos you did me to!"
obsidian killed leopard and ran away criyng. She fricked up big time. Oh dark forest what had she done!
DUDDENLY SHE BUMPED INTO A TOM! he was a black cat with hot hot like tater tot emo bangs and a toothd collar. His ice blue eyes had dark circles under them also he had a mcr tattoo and was probably the hottest cat she had ever seen but she didnt care because she decided she was lesbian defiantly.
"Hey, scourage" she wispered scaredly.
"Hello." He purred in a silk smooth voice.
Ok maybe she wasnt a lesbian he was like super hot.
"Do you want to uh, come with me?" Grinned scorage.
"Yes please" said obsidianwing.
"Your a killer like me now," said scourge. "Join bloodclan."
Obsidian thought about it for a while.
"Ok" she said.
Sudeenly obsidian was in labor.
(What will hapoen to teh kitz :0))
PART 16 BABBEHS Obsidianwing gave birth to one kit. He looked just like his father, blackstar. Obsidian felt tears in her eyes as scourge licked her babby clean. "I will mentore him." Said scourge. "Ok cool" said obsidian. They walked to bloodclan at the speed of fast. When they got there guards were protecting scourge's den. there was a leaopard spotted she cat that had a heart tattoo and long dark bangs and also a bright orange toothed collar like scoureges. She sat by her sister who was also spotted but orange and had no bangs or collar but she had bright red eyes. They let scourge and her pass through. "A queen in bloodclans nursery will take care of your kit." Mewled scourge "Ok" said obsidianwing. Scourge gave the baby to the guards and they took it away. Now obsidian and scourge were alone. Scourge gazed into obsidianwings eyes. Suddenly they were kissingz. Scourge gripped her shoulders and pulled her close. Obsidian resisted and pulled awAY. "I cant do this." She said "Why not" said scourge he was super hot but not as hot as leopardstar. "Because i love leopardstar." Said obsidianwing. "THEN YOU CAN GO BAK TO HER!" Growled scourge meanly. "IM KEEPING YOUR KIT HE WILL BE MY SON NOW" Obsidian was thrown out of bloodclan, she ran sobbing to leopardstars den where she found her dead body. She couldnt believe she killed her...but then leopardstar moved. "L-leopardstar?" Gasped obsidianwing. "Oh obsidianwing...dont you know leaders have nine lives? Also i forgive you" said leopardstar. Leopardstar laughed and ran to a part in the back of the cave.
PART 17 LEGENDS CAN DIE (Teh final chapter...what will i wright after dis? :3)) Obsidian purred as she play takled leopard star. Leopardstar chuckled and stared into obsidianwings eyes. Obsidian felt her heart beeting 10000000000 times a hearbeat. Leopard star kissed obsidian. Obsidian kissed leopardstar and pressed her body tothe ither she-cats. They made out. Leopardstar slipped out of her dress and flipped her bangz out of her eyes. Obsidian closed her eyes too extravagant leopardstar again but suddenly there was a burnjng pain in her back. She opend her eyes and saw that leopardstar had stabbeded her. "LEOPARDSTAR WHAt THE FRICK" screamed obsidianwing. "Did you really think i would forgive you dat esily?" Smirked leopardstar sexily. The world wen dark. Obsidian blinkind open her eyes and saw a crowd of cats in frontb of her. A pelt stoped forward. It was sol. "Sol...i..." Stuttered obsdian... "Its ok. I lov you." Said sol. "Am i going to starclan?" "You can or...you can stay in hte dark forest with me?" "Ok..." Obsidianwing lefg and joined the dark forest with sol. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *2 years later* Obsidian watched her ghost kits run around sols legs. They were the leaders if the dark forest and had three evil kits. The other dark forest leaders were called "wildfire" and "blazing insanity". They were loserrs and obsdianwing had higher power than them. But blazing was hot. "Let all dark forst cats join here for a meeting" called obsidianwing from the dark rock. The cats gathered. "Im here to tell you all today that..." She pused. "Its my time to fade. Wildfire will takenmeh place" there was a gasping. Obsidianwing threw herself over the edge of the dark rock. There was nothing. There was nobody. It was empty. Life was over in every aspect, but her life had at least been quite a quest. (The end)
Part 18- Dream
Pikesplash felt her chest heaving, her sides ached as if she had been running for a moon. She flailed awake, her fur was a mess and her green eyes were wild with confusion. Is this real? Was anything ever real? Her paws shook as she attempted to stand, but found herself collapsing back into her mossy nest with a thud.
A familiar mew finally shook Pikesplash to her senses, "Are you alright?" Gasped a tom from across the den, he frantically raced over to her.
"I'm fine, Duckflight...I just had a dream. It seemed so real, but it's fading from my memory fast." Pikesplash replied, her voice weaker than she had hoped it would be.
Duckflight padded in front of her, his dark tabby pelt shone in the sunlight, which now peeked through the top of their den, "Well, tell me what happened then!" He demanded, his eyes wide with wonder.
"I...I was named Obsidianwing. I had a lot of mates and I...was a leader?" Pikesplash said, looking up at her denmate.
Duckflight paused, his whiskers twitching with amusement, "Perhaps it was a past life?" He suggested.
"Yes," sighed Pikesplash, "perhaps."
But the voice haunted her for the rest of her life.