I decided to do a story similar to Starkit's Prophecy , except mine is going to be worse. This time, I hope my story drives you crazy! Let me warn you again (It warns you in the title): Rainbowkit is a major Mary Sue.
Rainbowkit was special. Maybe it was her rainbow eyes and pelt, maybe it was her outgoing personality. Or maybe it was how she was the only kit let out of camp, or maybe because she was the BEST hunter, the BEST fighter, and the BEST looking. Rainbowkit was out running around in a patch of flowers near the lake. She heard a mouse, and jumped on it. Rainbowkit jumped all the way back to camp. She padded through the barrier.
"Hai, everyone!" She screamed.
"Hi Rainbowkit!" Everyone in camp screamed back to Rainbowkit. Bramblestar jumped down from Highrock.
"Rainbowkit, you get to be a warrior right now because you're the BEST at everything."
"But what about my apprenticeship?" Rainbowkit gasped.
"Forget about the apprenticeship! You're the BEST hunter, the BEST fighter, and the BEST looking. Whoops, did I say that out loud?" Bramblestar asked, looking around camp.
"Yes, you did." Squirrelflight sighed.
"But face it; it's true." Bumblestripe chimed in. Every tom in camp nodded fast.
"Rainbowkit, I give you your warrior name. From now on, you will be named Rainbowbeauty, after your beautiful rainbow pelt and eyes. Our clan values you for being the BEST hunter, the BEST fighter, and the BEST looking."