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Hailyfagn U HATRE DIS CTA WAL DYE TO WARTH!1
Hailyfagn U HATRE DIS CTA WAL DYE TO WARTH!1
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Icefri broen qtuft
Darcfur balck shecatt via wih wite patch
Acorknsed red rtom and blue eyeh s
Apprentos*
Tauilpaw lonbg tal
Trnpwa AHHHHHHHHHHH 8YWE s
hailpaw Has spots lik hail
Ivypwa unkown hse mite e a trrst
ikd abt 9765437 mor apprtids but don matre
Qeens8*
Trid afre givn birht
Edres*
tangeltode toda
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Prologe
I wnas give thanks to MYSELF for being e genius!11!
Proluge
The StraCalN catats met in the forster write next's to ThundercAlN camp. I single old she wakled forwad and spoke. "SNARL" she gasped. DER WSA A BODI ON GRODN.
Itat was HAILYFAGN (Dats wat u get HATRE) teh stardarkcaln cats rejoced and cherreed for moons. BUTTOT DER WODA BE A PROPCY.
Wgen the stracaln cats receved news from straclan that tere was an propchy. They allal gatherd once more. Becau e the other shecat had ben shot in de head by a twoleg. She was repllced by anotre girl named GRASSEATER. Grasssniffer stepped forward and sceeemed a mornful sreem.
Once she had le it all oit she continud.
"A stike of young thonder will sve the calns!1!" she called
Everyone wenht hard with sh=oke.
Then GrassEater dead.
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Chapter 1
It si time to start Chaptr 1!1 I sper exited to right MA STORY PLZ REVIW
Chaptr 1
IT HURTR!1!1 The kits were coomong out oF MapleyiKit. Homolge (the dada) paded in and screemed.
"kittas are ben released!111" He proded the bello and FLET MOVIGN EWWWWW.';
"STANDNBAC HOMOPWA!" VENomRoll shooted as he shot into the den. He scanned the flor and noted MapleyKit and a ded corpse that hadt been clened form last time.
"HLEP" sh e murttured. "I thik one is slidding!1"
I smal tom sliped ot nicely he had an AFRO, and nice gonger for and bleu eyes that where green. He was ded hbut tehyh didt kow yet. Hae had white paws but a back one was blue with pink spoits.
The second child wsa a she girl who was nice and plump. Some of the otre kits like PimpleKit and Laefpaw erew waching cucuriososly. Thy named her Sparlkekit fom her hotnesd.
"She is AMAZNGI." Homoelegstar talked asa eh threqw Afrokit out of teh den.
Moe kits came and tehy we r named Yellokit for his ugy fce and plet. Rockkit becase homeoleg watned to name one and he idot, , adn Ashykit for her ash colrou. MapleyKIT loved tehnm all exept for YellowPaw, rockKit, Afrokit and AShyKiT.
Soo0o shee onli lved SparkelKit.
PLZAZ RIVEW OR A SDA :D
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Chaptr 2
If you red this I shoud see ur reviw
Chaptr 2 SPARKELKIT!1
She codnt belive that she1 could leave the den. She sadly loked at AfroKit, YellKit. And RoccKit's bodies on the flor. They codnt explir like she and AshyPaw could.
She happly waddled oit of the den and her sistrew hit her hed onn wall. "YO SO DUM ASHHERT!:"
"DON'T K=HIT DEN WALLS." She hated her sister because she took a little of the attention tat she deserves form MapleyHeat. SHE DESERVD IT ALL!11
So she palne to get her in troble.
"MA eyes arnt open yet!1" Assykit repled.
"Ill open tenm for you.,." She tookr her claws and forced her eyes open. Only a litt blood cam out.
" OWWWWWWWWWW!"1"1 AshPAw screemed.
"Yo wimp" SarkelKit said as she kickdd her. Now shebd was only child.
"ASHYKTIPWAHERT is DED!" she scremed.
Did u like it plz reviw, NO FALMING
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Chater 3
Sory about the late updtaem, plzzzzZz review to tel me how u like :D
Chaptre 3
SparkleKit loked at her sisters body sdaly. SHE CATN BELIVE SHE HAD CHILLED HER!1!
She weeeped and weped in her nest until1 she was hapy agin. She was able to sit virgin for her sister that nite with the rest of teh cLaN. EVN THE SENATOR WARRIORS AHAHAH.
She was soososo exited to sitwith thme. She fel asleep wih ashyFur's fur rotting by her nose.
She wok in a medow by THunderclans territory territoy. She loked arund her and sawa her Sister AshiStar1!1
"IM ososo sory for killed you!?" SparkelPaw said as she licked her sister (NOT IN THAT WAY U PERVS)
"oh its ok!57 Im mocha happer here in StarclAn"
"But I have a procy for u, but I fogit it bedcause the cat who was going 2 tell me ded in grave." She smilled as she said thjis.
"All u ned to know is THAT U IMPORT ANT!11/11!"
"Yyeeyyeysyyeys. I kew it." SparkleStar answers.
Ashykit faded awy.
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Chaptry 4
I had a selerbration!1! So her next chapter! STOP FLAMING :(
Cpahtgr 4
"Mapelkit, from this minute on you wil be kone as MapelPaw." SnortClaw schreeeched.
SparkelKit chered fro her mom "MApleKit, MaplePaw!1" she mewed.
"tyty" Mapelpaw said afte r the chatting. "I luv beaing apprentice."
SnortStar locked arund at his cats siting on the ground. "SPARKLEkIT PLZ STEP FORWORD'" she said.
Sparkelkit finished liking her butt and runned to the f ront. "OH YEHHH" she speaked "It tome TO BE IMPORTANT!?"
SnortKit looked at her misheviously "Yes."
"You are know SPARKLEPAW!"
THE HOLE clan chered for her, the elders sadi it was the loudest ceremoney they had herd in their loaves.
Now… SparkelKit culd start being imported.
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Chapter 5
Reviw plz
Chapter 5?
Today was a god day! SparklePaw was going to talk to Elderberry and VenomPaw about…
FIRESTAR1!11! AND THE PROCY ABOUT HRER!1?!
She was so excited! She was bursting so hard becase she WAS GOING TO HERE THE LEGDENS!1/?1
She had her about Firestarter be4, but she was going to lern HOW HEKILLED THE EVIL SANDSTROM AND SCROuge. They were so men and had killed her ansestors and her gret, great, gREAT parents. She haply pranced to teh elderds den ad saw the decomposing piel of elders from the last sikness.
She wrikled her knows and ad triped over a stifff leg! "EWWWW" she talked/. "Warriors shoul CLaen this up."
"Like no." sad an elder in the clorner. "I like seing them."
SparkleKit went awy and found ElderRolls and VEnomBery in the clereing.
"Tell sory plz?" she aske,d.
"Its rally scary, can u handel it SparkelPaw." Asked ElderBery.
"Like, of coorse!" She narrowed her eyes, she ws the bravets cat in all the calns. She coldl lisspen to a story.
"Ok !" Venomrolls kitted.
"A long timi ago. Sandstorm calld a Caln meeting in ThundeerClna. She maded sure tat evyrone was ther. Even the ctas havng kits in the nursrdy. Then SCROUGE cam and tehyh killed LIKE HALF OF EH CLAN!."
"oh me gosh. That s like almos everyone." SparkleStar gasped.
"But the.n Firestar cam and KIELD SANDSTORM AND SCROUGE RUNNNED AWY!1" Edlerkit finished.
"He saved the HOLE clan leik I am!." She sadly sad happliuy.
"I kowww." Edlerbery and Venomrols sad in unson.
"I Wil be booter than hikm."
This took so longgg, like 4 hours!?1! I wrk sooososo hard so plz hep and reviw :)
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Chaptr 6- Patrl
Chtper 6 Patrl
FLAMS TOLD ME TO START LABLNG CHAPES SO FINE
It was fnally here! SparkleKit could finalliy GO ONA PATRLOLOLOL "Its my fast time on patrol!"
Because thye were so exite d to have d her on the patrol RFAVHawk was soo1 happily "Ypu can led it"
He saw her betiful voiolet eyes and looked at her gray plet that had silveer sprkls all overe it.
Moonsplah had cum too so it was werd. Custardpaw and pimplepaws were also onn the patrol.
She caut them locking at her a lot and she was happy she made them jellos.
They wakled oit of capm at went to the Shadowclan borders to pee on rocs and bushs. It was relly fun.
Wen thya weresz done, thay saw some SHADOWcLAN ARRIOS RUNNED TOWURDS TEM!11!11
"OH KNOW" she scremmed as shs slaped one of tem to death.
"Its Shadowclan11"
Even theyr leader was thee… SmartStar. She runned to the oter sidesa of the battle cause he was relly hot.
"Killed den all11!11" he herd Smartsta-r screm at his kits.
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Chap ter 7
I relly liked dis 1
Chap ter 7 BATLE!`11
"Sto p ataking us plzzzZ!11!1" SparkelShine cawed.
She alredy noticed StikPaw and DeadPaw ded and anoter cat fro m ShadowClan.
"Dotn be s ho mean!" she talked,.
"I aM SmartttFur and I am the leder of the foreststst!" he said.
"I drae u to atak me."
SparkleKit locked into his eyes "Like Ok." She meewed.
She leped at him and swiped at his nek.
SmartStra looked at her in ho, "Grglgrglgrglgrgl.\" Was al that came out b/c he ded.
"I CONCURED SHADOWclan!111!1?!"
All of te Shadowclam kits bowed to he r and they all runned awy from her after.
All of te Shadowclam kits bowed to he r and they all runned awy from her after.
"Don't be scared I won';t lick youj." She was sda because they were all gone and only MoonKit was left on he.r patrol.
She locked over her sholder AND HAZSMATSTAR'S BODI WAS GONE!
"What the Drak Froster!?1Q?1Q?"
"Where died he go?"'
"Maybedc he had moe lives." Monsplash sputrd.
"ca.n I haved more lifes?" Sparke lased him.
"no."
She locked at him in defet and ran to capm "BUT I WANT MOE LIFES11!?" she screeeked.
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Chpater 9
WHAT DO U MEN I CUSED IN MY STROY! FLAMRS ARE ALL DED TO ME IF U DON'T LIKE DON'T READ I DIDN'T MAK U :'( LEVE OR DYE IN A HOLE
Chaptr 9 MEETINGAll of te Shadowclam kits bowed to he r and they all runned awy from her after.
StarPaw ran in2 cmp an collapsed on the soft pelt of her sister.
"Very1 ded!1" she screed.
The cln GASPED in HONOR! She had sved them alllol.
"She is so brave." She she-kist sad. "She is so hot."The non-gay tomsmsm mewed.
"I kow Im brave and hot." She said to dem al. "but we wil have to decid witch of u can be my mat in a compet tit ion.
Te hole caln chered
SnotStar cummed out of the nursey.
"SparkleSTAR!" she called.
"What I am pickling my mat SparkelPaw sais."
"MapleyPaw is s ick."
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Ch ap ter 10
I wa s sick… OF THE FLEMERS.
Chap t er 10 – Si ck
"What?" SparkleKit retarted.
"I alredy sad MAPLEYFOOT IS SICK." SnotNose said.
"Like, plz take me to he r ten!11'1"
"kk"
She led te way and the rest of te clan proteted. "I wall chose mat latr." SparkelPaw mewed.
"YAYAYAYAYAY." tehy allol chered.
W hen she went to te nursy
HER MOTR WA S GIVIN BIRTHR!?1!?"1qa1?.
"MOM STP GETIN PREGANAT!"
"IM SRRY." SHE resPINDED.
"Can I NAME the child ren." SparkleStar assed.
"like ofc." MapleyKit and HomoPaw sad in unson.
SnortStar snortered ad left.
After hours of push ing, 4 chils were bron.
Te fist 1 locked like SPARKELKIT. So he w as namd MINISPARKELPAW.1.1.
"He almost as h ot as me." S he kitted.
The next w as black with lot and lot of wite. She h ad blu eyes
"tat 1 ca n be named SpotKIt."
Text one w as a whie t om "
"He is MilkKit."
And te la st 1 LOCKED LIKE AFROKIT.
"HE IS PUFFKIT!1!1!1!11"
She ;eft te den and munch ed on a leg. T IME FOR COMPE TIT ION!?1?!1
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Chpater 11
Dus any 1 hve medcine?
Cpahter 11 - - Compe tit ion
SparklePaw walk out of the dedn.
"COMPE TIT ION TIMe!?1!11" she talked/
Al teh cats gath herd arund her to see who she would pik.
"Stop cuming twords me!111"
"Ur gong to ge t me s ich!"'
She thot for a cuple hours on how to pik. Sum cats were so tired that they dyed of exhastun.
"We wl do a ra ce to c who is wowrthy."
The cats chated I exitment, 1 OFF TEM WULD BE H ER MATED!?2.
"1 st back her alive wonssss"
TEY aallol runned awys.
"SHADWOCALN ATTACCCCCCq"!q?!e!Qiwlh PFWH
Nooooo te chadowcal is attacking SpaklPaw plzzzz hlep!
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cHaPPter 12
On of my keys is broekin so it hard to tipe. I had so mocj shccol work but I gve up on it so o yaay!? Also I maid a frend so I am gooing to sho w thejm my story!/1? This chpte tok almos a weak to wite to I hop u enhoy!
cHaPPter 12
-owioe—
"SHOWDOWCal is ATAHJKCIJN!?1Em21hiqgfoqieqouc" SparklePAW; ran towar the mob of shadownlan cats and beat 1 of them 2 deth.
The shadowclan apprentics HAILKit scrated at her throwt.
"like I NEED HALP." SH e lowdlky scramed.
Her loaf flashed be4 her eye and thend…
Filllellrlleerer
MINISPARKELKIT CAME AND HAILkitPAW.
She locked at him in surprise "u saved me…. Woch is gud becase I best ThundeColon cat."
"I kowwww" minisparkelshade retorted "that is rye I sved u!"
SparkelShien rushed over she saw a warror ATTAQING MAPLEYHPAWS
"nononodnoeno ill sav u !?Qw2"
;_;
She slashed and slushed untoil the she-cat tom cats were motionless in a pudle.
"like thnask forn saving me sparkelStar111" mapley thougt outloud.
"ur welcome momom!"
She stood there and wtahced the shajidoclan ctas dye infont of herrer.
"RETREEEEEET." Smartclammy runned.
"yeha we wonnn." sparkelkIT scrammmmed. She saw bodis in clering,
"tak those to the windcaln borderer and throw thnem ov er." She sad to the eldersssqas.
She wne d into henr den and waited.
"she was so brave." Sad one cat
"she sved my life" said another.
MiniSPARKLEkit poked his hed innin. "Come out and talk to the clannan."
"okay, I didn't want 2 but I gueuees I wall."
Sveral of her clanmats, ravenHAWk, moonspald, reddedpaw, puffPAW. Even SnotSTAR were watin for her!?1?
"U were the bravest and strgnest and smartyest." SnotKit saidjn 2 her as eh sneezes.
"I known I wasa." She ralled her eyesz, she didn't nnNeed to poijnt oyt the OBvios.