tehy comed ofer too ther mommy"wat is it" sias spakrlekit
"toady is a speshil da fer yu sarkelkit. she sis butt nut yu lodrkit." se glars att the ugly kit hes sew ugy everon hats him. butt thy donut haet spakrlekitt. shes two bootyfilled to hte nad aslo ver awsum. veryon luvs hur.. yee
"waut is it mommy: shssse ask
butt beefir her moemmey can anser GrasStra ladder of thunderldlcan yeels soper lod, "al ctaws gater arund th caln stoned for a meting"
"omg omg omg" sias spakrlestar reepeetingly. "ist me apent ic sermone"shes so hap
"yee my butious doter it is" sia majestickspakel.
"wat abutt me?'mkfe chjqbajc,c" asid losedjit.
"nu/ yur two git two b apenticE" grls mahestysaprkel shocing him bak
"wel, yee." she sas unsurtinly. ti si troo seh es a veree buttyfilled kity wit hur magetik purpel furs and astruking ranebo yees. lustkit juts gut stuk wit nasy locking furs and a stoped fas. "butt insid yur botyfil i promis."
"comm on!1!" magestispaerkl grapps spartjklekutt and brigs hur otsid
laa of tuenrclan is wateing outsid. the no its huer apetis sermonee an ar hapy fur ther fav kit. butt sum lock confuzed.
"wer is loserkt somon wunders
"shut u[" sais someoo els
"tundrecali toda is spesial. " anoses grastar. "spakrlekit fur a log tim we haf non yur ver butyfil butt no we wil no if yur a gud warer yu probly wil be. butt ltes c. sins yur so kawaii yu wil b my apenrtis"
"Spakrlepaw!1! spaklrepaws!" evryon yeels hapyly.
sparlepqw is su hap to b an apsprentis buttten she notises loserkit in the enursey. he locks sad and losery
oh nu she reeliss mabe she was rong abut him. he ugly brothre igte b ugl n teh insid two.
"oak spakrlepawe atax him.. she bols him ofer smdeh fald int the grund.
"wo" he sais "yur a gret fihter!"
"o nu im bad," she sias humblee. "just beginers lock thats al"
"nU." Grasststar stars in hr butyfiled gorgis reinbo eyeyeys. "spakrlestappaw. ther is someting yo shud now."
"wat" assk spalrlkeaw impashant two no wat cod it be?/?/?/"":?"?:?/:"{+
"i reeseeved a propsy" tehh gret spakrlels wil ris upl and safe tunderclax to defeet the evul river and teh loosre of kitys!" he sias "i tink its abot yu"
"wat cud it meeen?" wondress aprklepsw.
"lets nut fucos on tat no. he sas i shud nut of tod yu"
"nu, i neded two no. it must f bean my detsinee" seh sais
"lets fucos on traningng" grassstar meos
he swipsat spakrlespaw an she dojs wit ees.
"mak itr hardre? she chalages him
"wel i dunt want too wekr yu two herd. yur olyy just an apengtic," he remids her
"i cantak it" sparlepaw isists
"wel ok"
grasstar takls sparkel[aw he dpuses he r two teh grond. it sems he has one butt than sparklepa kiks up nking him of her. se twits and pins don her menter. he gaps brethlesly the breths noked out of im
"i win" sparlekpaw sia hapy
"yes yu ar veree powerfulled," agres grasstar panting "no git up ples! omg it herts"
"ohmegosh im sory" spsakrqpaw relizes she is krushing him an dgets u[ anf grastrar gets up on his green feets
"yur such a god figter" [urrs rasstarga
"oh taks! she meys butt yur reel god two" whe didnt lik grastar prasing herso muk. it wis nic of corse butt she didnt lick beng treeyed lik she wus spesial evn if sturcaln sias eh is/
suddly the warer paperfur com4s runign in. her wite furs are cvrered wit blud. "riavelrlcna are ataking!1!1"
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a clifhanger ther wil be lots of thos :D plz revie and nu flams teh y maks me sadddd
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the batel
guys omg omg someone flamed me again!1 :(((( yur so meen i cant beeliev yu guys juts dunt reed it com on :(
if yur nic g ahed butt if nut leev
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"lets gu!" frasstar yols, "folo m spurklepaq!"
"buttimjut cant fit riverclaln im jst an apenreyicE""""""""" she rpotistssgrasstar luks serusly at hur. "nuyu can. yur spesal rember starckan sad soo"
"oak," she agreess burt es stil nervis
tey folo pelajepapel two teh ivercka berder. the gu two teh berder att suningroks at suningrox tibercln warryerszs ar ataxing tthudnerclan.
"fite" odors grasstar runing intu th e batel.
spakrlepaw eruns in suningroks and atax a riveraclan warera ver biggy gra tom he sooper bigmuhc mora bigger then spakrlepaw. butt elle si ver strung an elle clas him
"go way!" she his
he rars and bits her cara
soPARKKLEPAW SHREEEKS! "it herts!" it herts so bad
fuled of rages she skrathers him! he rans iff. seh chas him intu teh rivur and he forrest jumps in.
"rieverclan reetrreet" he yeels
yhe rievrlcan ca hump into e river na dleeve
"we one!" chers grastsra "sparklepia com heer!11!111!"
spakrlepaw cumms over "wat i5 it grassy tar"
"yu fou stonestar!1!111 yu beet him up ver gud gud kob" grasstar prases her he locks at s0qrklepa. snes so beutifull lock at thos eyeeys so aqmamaxing
"ohmehgersh tat was teh lader?/?/?""/?{:?P:LLL:" spakrlelkspaw eklaems
"yee. lets g bak two capm ther is someting we must do, " hatrssstar saus
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finly sum atkion yes rite wel therell b moarr ya
no mor flams plees
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the jelis kit
im cri i gut lamed agen! iv only haf yhis store fir lik a day y ar so many peepol flaming it :(((((
wel for mu nic reeders heer yu go
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spalrepw reterneed home with rastra paperfir and sum moar woryars letherfac, dtarwfoots, chesemilk, an sarlitcla. ther al skrachted up the medicyn catt leevylevs gapsed "gaps yur al hert" an got a bunch of leves and hervs nd heels tjem al.
"we fut rieverclan!they wer tryin steel wsuingroks" she xplaned "i beetted ip ther ladder stsonefstar"
"oh :oserkit fruns. i wbdner wen i wi be aoentis to""
"it wil b sun!' spakrlekit assurs him "yur sixks mons old two! + sens Grasstar say how gud if a fitre iu am hell probly think yur a god fiter to"
"wat do yu men" loserkit anrros his eys. "he;ll problaly think mi a giid fiter juts cause yu afR? i M a god fitgher! ill sho yu!"" angry he stermed awa grubling agryly
"thats nut wat i meened" spakrlepaw protists. she is abut too chase afer him butt than grastar stopps her"Spakrelpaw in caling a caln meating yuu muts com" he sais
"buy loserikit raned away" sobs spaprklepa
"wel,, hes a loser so leev him" gratstsa shrubs
"but" sparlelpaw begin
"ll cats old enuf t cacht ther one pray ather beneeth the xlan ston fur a clan metung" grasstar uyuls interuping her
allof thdunerclan gatehrd arond the pray rock ting Magestickspakrle sit necks to her bootifulled duter. "i herd abot hre fit she wispers in hert eer "guud jub! beeting the cllleder i yur ferst fit isunherd off!"
"wel tanks but-" sge vegas
"wh cares abutt loserkti ehis a losekr" rows majhestcispakrle
"ctats of thunderlcna!" grastay yeels "2dA we beated up rieverlcan and one bak sunirocs"
everon chereed "yee" tehy scheered"on cat stod out from the step ferwerd"
she gaps"gas[" and ste[pes ferwerd
"yur a enw appenteice but yur ver spesial. starclan saus so i t must be tru. and so i gife u yur warer name yu wil b spakrlegreatenss fur yur stregthn brafery cerige loyility inteligense and kindnness"
"trater!: yols wetefur and sone the ehol clan is chaghnting "treyter trayeter" magesticckspskarle sovs "i lovrd hi m to muck!wed idnent men to mak kirs...: she glansess at psazrkleg8nis and LoserPPW
Grasstar cam up, fruning "weel it es tru yu hafe betrayed yur Thdunerc;an. yu must be punighed"
"i wil punsoisdeh herrr" wtefur oponces whiteout werrning qand bits atmagetsiuc puches thee deperty awayy butt " nu is two latte." shs4e reelizes. magetsyickspaffkrle leys ded int eh gras blud poring out of ther throT
"nu! keevyleevs yu must saf ehr!" shd escreems
the medycine cta coms overy and snifs the e ded bofy. "nop she daed" she sais
"yu lilled her!" filed wiht the raeg spakrlegr8nis lunche s hersef athe derpidy, kilijng wetfur wit ron bloy two te nekk
her gret cerige and stretghn ha s no don soemting horibel- she es a MERDEreR!"
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dun dun dah thiues wa sew intesne! ye hops yu lick :) no flamae s ples.
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the exilel
hi ima bakc! ibe ben gun fro a loon timei kno! i juts guots so muh hates and dit maed me ver dsad. but im feling betrr no w so imm finly abk wiht a ipdaete!
grasstar luks at asparklegreatness whos cuverred in blud. his green eyes are naroed.
"yu must lev thunderclan," he orders. "yu kiled wetfur"
"she kiled my mom!" spat sparklepaw
grasstar luks away crying. "she was a treyter. now...so ar yu," he replys crying
"get out!" bagmouth spits at sparklegreatness. soon the whole clan is shouting "get out! git out!"
she runs away ters blur her vishion. she kant beeleve wat has hapened. one moment shes a heero for beeting stonestar the next a vilan for aveging her mother.
sparklegreatness doesnt no were to go. i was destined for greatnes! starclan sais so... they didnt brig me bak too life for noting! shurly this was juts a part of her destiny... evrytgubf wod tur ut rite in the end. she juts had too hold onto hope and everting wud be allrite.
I think i no were too go! she locks out at teh riveer. I will go to my fater! i can oly hop he wil axept me!111!11
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into rieverlcan
agen i aplojize 4 the wate! ive bean soo busy i rely wish i cud uplaod mor kwickly...
aslo sorr for the mesed up chaptetrs bef4. i ficksed tehm now yay
PSarklegretaness pawses at the rivur. she reelizses she doesnt no how two swiwm! butt she muts tri. she kakan heer her clanmeats cuming.. theyey cant katch her or shell be in big trubel!
she rirksks it and jups in. teh watettr is kold and macks her wet. but tthen she relsizes she deOES kow how to swim! it muts be cuz her daddys a rivierclan catt. and beceeeeeeeeeeeeeecase she so. Greet.
she wims veee well. to the other sied. dhe hares bagmouthn begind her. "wahta she eskapped!"
"oh. wel" sys papperfur.
Spakrlegretaness is such joy shee gut awa! shes save/ she gos on rivierclain teritoree. she isnt az sav as she thut! a riverl an parorle is aprosing!
"lill her!" Orders the cst in the leed.
spakrklegreaness skreems as they tattak.
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the safeor
im try uplode qwik!
"wate!" shots a fat blak tom (butt not liek rasistly) "lock. cud it be"
"R U eeelsnuts?" spakrklegretanes acks
"yes!yur my doter arent you/" he sais
"yes"
"but i haf bD NOOS" she sais sadyl.
"wat elsnout xplane wats haping" snurls a MASIV grey tom whoo had erded to kEeL spakrlestar
Elsnouf hung him hed "i sho messsz uP wen i wuz yunger" heh beguns "i meated a purdy shexat. butt she not riverrr? clan... se tHUNDERCLAN!11!" hur naem is.
majestyspakel." he sihs heevly. "she such prity. i loafed her!" he beaks of cringing. teers run down heiis fas. "i-i loafed her to- to muck" he wisperr
"oh. ok" saus stoneestar "we all mack misteaks. she a prietyty mistaek" he wiglses his ybros at sparkellsgreatnis.
"ew"
"wat"
"dONT dflert wih me. its weerd"
"butt anywywya" elsnout say. "y u heer?"
he cudnt beeleaf hiw prety she is. pretter then her momma
and is har dto be pretyer then her momma
"i wus eckseeled. she say sadly. i keled wetfur shee jilled mommy. afer we find out yur are daddy"
"wayt their ar moar of yo?" he interups
"yee. meh bro. loserkit. but i thinks hes evul. mmmmudluijfkhdakjjfd maybuh."
"anyawayh, wehn wetfur kil! momeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. i avege momme i kiII HER BACK"
she sad
"les takeout her in toe ar clam" eelsnot begs h9iis clanmeats.
"no."
"lol" dpsakrlegre4ness says
"im serus"
"oh
"eelsnot yo betreyeded yur callm. so did her." stonestar locks sat paklreggreatniss. shes so butful. luk at those kawaii eyeyyes and hrth magesty furs. he want her. but kan she be trussed. or eelsnout tacking a funderrcaln meat lik that was verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr bad.
"wayt their ar moar of yo?" he interups
"yee. meh bro. loserkit. but i thinks hes evul. mmmmudluijfkhdakjjfd maybuh."
"anyawayh, wehn wetfur kil! momeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. i avege momme i kiII HER BACK"
she sad
"les takeout her in toe ar clam" eelsnot begs h9iis clanmeats.
"no."
"lol" dpsakrlegre4ness says
"im serus"
"oh
"eelsnot yo betreyeded yur callm. so did her." stonestar locks sat paklreggreatniss. shes so butful. luk at those kawaii eyeyyes and hrth magesty furs. he want her. but kan she be trussed. or eelsnout tacking a funderrcaln meat lik that was verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr bad.
"they shud bottle leaf: says a bleu took
"wel wat wel we dough stonedsatdrdy" elsnout axed him
"i mus tinkle." he luks at thme. "i donut want c yu rto vor a weke. met me her afer that and il gif YO MY DESION."
"ok"
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loners
Sparklegreatnus and her dad gut zlong v welll considring the hat never meat befur. S)Arkles wuz a awsum huntur da best.. she cot lotz fo prays for eEelsnout ad her/
"icanut beelef how god U R!" he sais as she brinp bak a rabet too gu alung wiht her 5 squrels 46 birbs and 578, mouses.
"now we haf all teh fuds we need fur teh weke." sparkellgreatsess sais she SO hap hur d4d is prod off hr.
Eelnsout eat da rzbbet ver fST.. and ten som mouses. spaklegr8ns eeeeets al teh squrels teh 10the tat fud wud make any1 elz fat butt ses spesual so she stay no fts.
"te!l me abutt lifing in thudnerclan" eelsnot meyos
"it was God," she ansers. "ever1 lick me/Gr asstar was my meter!ajkuhljdnkshl i wus gud fiterr. butt, to gode i kileeded wetfur.."
"is oak" he ashurs her. "yu wear avejein mAJESTYSPARKLE" he cry "i kanf velieve shes ded!"