HI FUYS ITS BEEN LIKE WHAT CA COUPLES MONSHS BUT NOW I HAVE T IR IS STARKITS PROPHCY THE SEQCUEL
but i think it will be EVEN BETTER THAN THE FIRST ONE because i have a new editoe. one that doesnt make all the red squiggly liens appear underneth the words when i tye them in microsfot wurd! it i MY BOYFRIEND ESY I HAVE A BOYFRIEND AND HIS NAME IS TOMAS HE IS SO HOT. Yes I nkw I said I was a lebisan with a curhs on Jazy but i met thoams and he told me i luvwd him and that he loved me and he said i shuld be his girlfeirn dso now i am. Altough i cant sewhy he lieks me hes two years older and he doenst seem to be that niec to me ecept for wen where aloen and he doesnt want me to tel people hat hes two years older then me. But anywya hes rely god at engilsh he has an S in engslith clas and hes also two yers older than me hes in neinth grade! yea weve been dating for a month and fiev days nao and he red starkits prophcy and he said i needed to made a sceon done and akses me if je could ehlp edit it ecaseus hes so god at english. He sadi il be haledi as the best riter since shaekspear! So i thoguht about a plto and ere it is.
STARKITS PROPJCY 2 THE TWO SILBIGNS
SUMARY: StarKit has precendants in ThunerCaln there names are Anglepaw and CrimsonPaw. Thers also anew CLAN caled Mappleclan theyre amde from the kiteypets and rogues of the clans and also there are cats theat dont liek there on caln. But AnglePaw aend Crsimon Paw and AL OF TUNDERLCNA DONT LIEK MAPELCALN so what wil they do about mappel clan?
(i didnt have thomas edit any of that snce i wanted al my reers to nwo that I AM STIL WRITING THIS STORY JUST CAUE THOAMS EDITS IT DONT MEAN ITS NOT MIEN.)
Anyway hers the allegianes thams did edit ths and also chapter une. Also thoams aded a cople cats to the alegiances after he finshde editng them but i dint get to se them so i hoep theyr god names!
THUNDERCLAN
LEADER
RainStar-A pretty young she cat with rain-colored fur and blue eyes
DEPUTY
EarthBlue- A beautiful she-cat with a buxom personality
MEDICINE CAT
PawStep- A small calico tom with green eyes
(Apprentice- ShadePaw)
WARRIORS
RedFur- a red cat with white eyes
feather- A black she-cat with sapphire blue eyes
FrozenHeart- An old white tom with green eyes.
(PlatinumPaw)
StrollLlama- once on a stroll she saw a LLAMA and that's how she got her name!
TigerLily- a she-cat who looks just like a tiger
TwoLeg- A cat with only two front legs but he is the fastest runner so it makes up for it!
MarijuanaSkin - A hairless tom addicted to drugs who is always trying to sell them to other warriors but doesn't get anywhere.
GorsePuddle- A brown tabby tom with brown eyes.
LightningStrike- A yellow she-cat with a brown tail and black eyes.
SexyBeast - CaA brown cat with curly brown fur and green eyes. He is very sexy.
QUEENS:
MoonTree (UglyKit and StoneKit PineKit)
APPRENTICES
FirePaw- A bright ginger he cat with ginger eyes.
CrimsonPaw- A black she cat with red eyes
AngelPaw- A white she cat with blue eyes.
SnakePaw- A useless brown tom.
ELDERS
NoTail- an angry elder with no tail
WrinkleWhisker- A wrinkly old she cat
RIVERCLAN
LEADER
MusicStar- a musical brown she-cat with black and white eyes.
DEPUTY
SambaPelt- A yellow she-cat with heavy fur and blue eyes.
MEDICINE CAT
RachelClaw- The was named after my NEW BEST FRIEND RACHEL GUYS! She has blonde hair and green eyes. (I'm still friends with Jazzy after all Thomas is her brother! But Rachel's also my new best friend!)
WARRIORS
JazzPelt- A handsome ginger tom with yellow eyes
EchoMeow- A striped cat with brown eyes
DiamondSong- A very shiny white cat with blue eyes
(MelodyPaw)
MarchPoppy- A fat she-cat with black fur and tortoiseshell eyes.
WanderClaw- A brown tabby she-cat with emerald eyes
DustClaw- A grey tabby with dust-colored eyes
APPRENTICES
MelodyPaw- a young she-cat with green fur and green eyes
DrumPaw- a white and brown he-cat with grey eyes
SongPaw- A she-cat who looks like the cat I have!
BeatPaw- A tom with hazel eyes and brown fur.
SHADOWCLAM
LEADER
TwistedStar- A black cat with red eyes and a curly tail and curly whiskers.
DEPUTY
StarBurn- A black tom with burning red eyes.
MEDICINE CAT
GhostShadow – A grey tom with grey eyes
WARRIORS
LostHope- A black tom with hopelessly grey eyes.
RoseBlood- A red she-cat with limpid black eyes.
RavenNight- A suicidal black she-cat with purple eyes.
DepressedHeart- A sad black tom with cry-colored eyes.
ScarFace- A tom with a scar over his right eye.
APPRENTICES
DarknessPaw- An evil tom with purple eyes.
SpiralPaw- TwistedStar's son; Blue eyes and a curly tail.
ClawPaw- A tom with very large menacing claws.
BloodPaw- A blood-colored she-cat with vein-colored eyes.
WINDCLAN
LEADER
BreezeStar- A feverishly beautiful she-cat with windy eyes.
DEPUTY
WinterShine- A white she-cat with blue flecks and blue eyes.
MEDICINE CAT
MapleBreeze- An orangey-brown she-cat with brown eyes.
WARRIORS
WillowWhisp- A thin brown she-cat with grey eyes.
WindRunner- A rapid she-cat with blue eyes.
ThinFur- A mousey brown she-cat with very thin fur and burning sunset eyes.
CloudPelt- A puffy tom with white fur and white eyes.
HurricaneClaw- A powerful grey tom with big muscles and brown eyes like flying debree.
APPRENTICES
BreezePaw- A young whispy she-cat
OwlPaw- A she-cat who looks just like an owl!
EaglePaw- A she-cat with a white head and brown body
CrowPaw- A blue tom with blue eyes
ScentPaw- A greenish-grey tom with pink eyes.
RustPaw- A rust-colored tim with coppery eyes.
MapleClan
LEADER
YellowStar- A yellow she-cat with yellow eyes
DEPUTY
AmberClaw- A she-cat with brown fur and amber sunset eyes
MEDICINE CAT
OakTree- A black and white speckled tom with barky eyes.
WARRIORS
SparklePelt- A kittypet that was made into a warrior. She is fat and grey.
BeaverFang- A brown tom with green eyes and large teeth.
TwistedTail- A grey tabby who's tail is permanently curled over his left hip.
AppleGleam- A kitten with apple-colored fur and grey eyes
APPRENTICES
ButterflyPaw- A kitty with butterfly wings, pink fur, and yellow eyes.
TinselPaw- A very Christian tom with silver fur and red-green eyes.
WiltPaw- A brown tom with red flecks and eyes.
Chatper Oen The NewPROPHECYE
CHAPTER ONE THE PROPHECY
It was a dark and stormy night. Up in Starclan there were many cats waiting to talk about the future. Their names were StarGleam, JazzSong, RedPaw, LakePool and FluffyKit. There was a pool of water. They all looked into it.
"I can see the future!" StarGleam gasped. "I see it very clearly. Starclan has given a prophecy."
"What does it say?" Asked JazzSong. "Tell us, StarGleam!"
StarGleam looked up and her purple fur glittered in the starlight. "It is a prophecy from Starclan!" She said. "Crimson maples will block the storm's wrath,"
All of the cats gasped in shock. Such a mysterious prophecy! No cat would know what it meant until the words it spoke came to pass.
"How can we warn our beloved clan?" Wondered FluffyKit.
"We will send a message to PawStep." Said RedPaw. "Inform him of the impending destruction. Then, he can prepare his clan for the worst."
"Okay." Agreed the rest of the cats. Then they left to go meet PawStep in a dream.
FluffyKit remained behind. "I only hope no one dies." He muttered. Then he walked away into the night.
reveiws would be niec! thank u! 3
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Chapter Tow A HEROS IS bRON
Light crept through the holes in the nursery as a QuailFeather licked her two newborn kittens. She purred as she heard a young tom enter the den as well. "Hello, WhiteStar." She mewed happily.
"How are they?" WhiteStar asked, beaming down on his two new kits.
"They're both girls." QuailFeather said. The couple took a moment to smile at their daughters. One had whiter fur than snow, and the other had fur darker than the night sky. "They don't have names yet, you know,"
WhiteStar laughed. "Let's name the white one AngelKit. She has fur as white as an Angel. And the other…"
"CrimsonKit!" At first WhiteStar didn't understand, but then he saw a pair of deep red eyes blinking up at him curiously.
"AngelKit and CrimsonKit it is, then." WhiteStar meowed. "Excuse me, I have leader duties to attend to." He smiled at his kits one last time before leaving the nursery.
That was six moons ago, thought AngelKit to herself. Both her parents were dead now, and it was just her and CrimsonKit. MoonTree took them in after that, so she was their mother in a way. CrimsonKit could barely remember their real mom, she was too young. AngelKit remembered a little but not much. She decided to push the thought from her mind.
"AngelKit! AngelKit!" she heard a voice from behind her.
"What is it, MoonTree?"
"You need to get ready." The queen said. "You and CrimsonKit become an apprentice today!"
Oh boy! AngelKit had almost forgotten. She nodded happily and bounded over to her spot in the den to get ready.
"Oh hi, Angelkit," said a kit next to her. It was CrimsonKit. She looked very excited to be bade an apprentice also. AngelKit noticed she had made her fur extra clean and black for the occasion. "Are you ready?" CrimsonKit asked.
"You bet! I've been waiting for this day my whole life! :D"
"Me too!" The two kits nodded and walked outside with their mother for the first time to be made apprentices.
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Chapter Thre The AperenticesShi
A/N: why are thry so manyu comments of peope who dont like it! cmon guys if you dont like the fasnfic you DONOIT HAVR TO READ ITGOD THOAMS IS GONNA BE ANGRY FPR MAKING ME CRY.
oh yeah thomas! I would have forgotn i went over to his houise yesterday that's wht the chapter is so late. We hugn out and watcehd a movie and he kept wanting to kis me but i wanted to watch the movie so O said no and he got a bit anoyed but I WANTED TO SEE THE MOVIE. If he wants to kiss me he can wait until aftre the movie but he kept insitstng so we kised during thr movie and it was fun :DDDDD he didn't realy want to watch the movie he said we were alone so we shodul use the alon time but I dint knwo what he meatn by that and he got kind of agnrhy but I love ihm so I dont' care 33333
Anwyay enough about him ther hs the chapter!
Then CrimsonKit and AngelKit went underneath the HighLedge to be made apprenticed! RainStar got up on the HighLedge and called out to the clan. "Let all those cats old enough to catch their prey gather below the ledge for a clan meeting!"
All the cats gathered. "We are making two of our kits apprentices today." Said RainStar.
AngelKit was so excited! Finally she got to be an apprentice, she'd been dreaming about this day for all the months shed been alive and finally it was here! "I wonder who my mentor will be." She said to CrimsonKit who was bouncing besides her. "I don't know." CrimsonKit responded. "I just hope it's someone good!"
"Shush" Meowed MoonTree glaring at them. "Listen to Rainstar,"
RainStar was glaring at them too but she stopped when they looked at her." "AngelKit please come forward." AngelKit did and then Rainstar jumped off the Ledge and walked up to her. "BY THE POWERS OF STARCLAN I OFFICIALLY NAME YOU... AngelPaw." She said. The entire clan clapped. "And your mentor will be... me!"
"OH MY GOSH!" Screamed AngelKit happily. "ARE YOU SERIOUS?"
The clan was shocked too! You could tell because they were gasping and murmering to the other. "That's special!" LightningStrike said.
"Serious." RainStar said. "Your going to be the best warrior in the hole forest with me as your mentor!" she said grinning widely. "We should get started right away.
"WHAT ABOUT ME?"! Wailed CrimsonKit pushing her way thru the cats. "Whose my mentor?"
"Oh right," RainStar nodded. "I should probably give you a mentor too right?" "Well your mentor is... MarijuanaSkin."
"NOOOOOOOOO!" Wailed CrimsonPaw. She ran off into the forest crying. MarijuanaSkin! RainStar couldn't have given her MarijuanaSkin for a mentor! He had no fur and he did drugs! (A/N MarijuanaSkin was one of the names Thomas added! I don't know what a marijuana is but the word sounds kind of pretty. But he does drugs and he has no fur, he can't be a mentor!) He'd never be able to teach her ANYTHING useful!
She ran and ran until she couldn't run any more and then she collapsed on the ground. What she didn't realize was that she had run all the way into Riverclan territory!
"Well look what we found!" Said a warrior stalking up to her. He licked his lips. "New apprentice? Thunderclan from the smell of her. We should take her hostage! She could be useful."
"NO!" CrimsonPaw wailed but no one cared! MarchPoppy dragged her back to the Riverclan camp and then she was a prisoner!
"Oh, Starclan, what will I do now?" She wailed.
But noone could hear her...
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Chapter 4 The VALENTINS DAY SPECAIL!
CHAPTER THRE THE VALENTNES DAY SPECIAL
AN': STOMP GLAMMING THE STORY GUYZ ID YOU FONT LIEK IT YOU SONT HAVE TO READF IT GAH I BEHT YOURE ALL STANISTS WHO DONNT LIKE JWSUS.
HAY GUYZ GUES WHAT IS VALENTINES DAYYY!111!11 I ma liek so exited 4 it and I hung outwith Thomas ALL DAU! He came ovr after schoool and gave me a boz of cholcates btu I got mad him CUZ THE BOX WAS SUQAR/e AND TIS SUPPOSED TO BE HEARTS SHAPED! Theb he got made a t me for being bad and so I threw the rode I was gonna get for him in the treash. Then we BROEK UP but aftre he came bacl and said we kuved eachohter and not WERE BACK TOGETHER! Isnt that liek sucg a roMantic stroy? ANYWAT I hoep you enjot yhte cVALENTIBES DAY SPECIAL
I suggast u listen to this qhile hearinbg "I wil,l Always LOve You by WITNEY HOUSETON. OMG I was so sad when she dies shes suxh a good singer and stuff! ;;:;
AngelPaw ran around Thunderclan camp. "WHERE ARE YOU CRIMSONPAW!" She wailed. Nobody knew where she had gone. MarijuanaSkin didn't seem to care that his apprentice was missing, so it was up to AngelPaw. "CrimsonPawwww!" She went up top RainStar but she just shrugged because she didn't know.
"I know where she is!" It was a voice from behind her. AngelPaw turned her head and saw….. FIREPAW! FirePaw was the most attractive Apprentice in the forest and all the girls liked him because of it. AngelPaw had never met him before actually because she was a new Apprentice but she had head about him! When she saw FirePaw she instantly knew what they meant and saw that she was blushing really bad. "Hi," FirePaw said. "You must be AngelPaw!"
"How do you know my name?" I asked blushingly.
"Because you're as pretty as an angel!" He said. I giggled and tried to make it cute.
"We should go out," FirePaw said.
"OMG YEAS!" I shouted! He smiled and said "Yayy ok."
"Do u know where my sister is?" I asked.
"Yeah!" Shouted FirePaw. Riverclan is holding her HOSTAGE!"
"THAT'S TERRIBLE!" Angelstar screamed. "LETS GO SAVE HER!"